He who was hauled down, shall rise some day,
to him ppl will bow,
not out of respect,
but with utter fear.
But it is fear again,
that they worship God,
fear of losing, fear of failure,
fear of the unknown,
or may be fear of His power?
It is easy to stand with the strong, but now that he has risen,
who shall it be? The stronger one?
The creator or the one who stood for himself?
what will decide? A war or is it the destiny again?
The man above is there for us, they say, n deep in dere hearts,they know,
He is responsible for the man beneath,
for his evil, for his strength even,
coz he was also his son, who just thought different.
God forgives us watever, we say,
then why His own child wasnt?
what are we to do now?Prepare
ourselves for the same fate,
or just accept, He too can make mistakes?
PS: I am a strong blvr of God. Thoughts put here are just to luk from a diff perspective.
lets start with d good points n bad points..the content of the poem is cohesive. There is no break in the thoughtful flow.. But is it actually fear, dat makes us pray God? n why so many questions?? This poem has let the reader to interpret it in several poem, thus the poets idea is obscure n open for interpretation.. Its nt a style un heard of but it may depict a confused state. :) :)
ReplyDeletestill a very nice composition.. never thot u ld present a evil side.